You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the vacation spot you have chosen •explain how you plan to spend your time there •invite your friend to join you on your vacation Begin your letter as follows: Dear….
Dear Sim,
I hope you are doing great. I am writing
this
letter to give you some information about my upcoming vacation.
It's been ages Linking Words
we
met. I can barely remember Correct word choice
since we
that
Correct determiner usage
the
last
time we met Linking Words
on
my brother's wedding. Change preposition
at
Well
it's Add the punctuation
Well,
long
time now and I have planned to go on vacation with my friends and I am inviting you as well. I am planning to go to Change the article
a long
Toronto
. There are plenty of things that we can do over there Use synonyms
as well
Linking Words
as
spring is beautiful over there, many of my friends have recommended Correct word choice
and
to
go see the CN Change preposition
apply
tower
which is Capitalize word
Tower
tallest
building. As you know, I am working with Change the article
the tallest
Marriot
Correct article usage
the Marriot
hotel
so I have many options that where can we stay. I have planned 7 days Capitalize word
Hotel
for staying
in Change preposition
to stay
Toronto
. Big Use synonyms
mall
and Fix the agreement mistake
malls
aquarium
Fix the agreement mistake
aquariums
is
the tourist Verb problem
apply
attraction
in Fix the agreement mistake
attractions
Toronto
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, we will not forget to visit Linking Words
Toronto
Island, there are plenty of fun activities that we can do and can have Use synonyms
picnic
on the Island.
Please let me know if you are interested Fix the agreement mistake
picnics
to join
us because I remember Change preposition
in joining
last
time when to have Linking Words
conversation
Add an article
a conversation
the conversation
for
Change preposition
about
vacation
you mentioned that you Add an article
a vacation
the vacation
want
to visit Wrong verb form
wanted
Toronto
. I hope you don't have any other plans. Let me know if you are coming and I will give you dates shortly for your trip.
Looking forward to Use synonyms
hear
back from you.
Warm Regards,
SamChange the verb form
hearing
kaursaijbir
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coherence
You can enhance the clarity of your letter by organizing your ideas into distinct paragraphs more effectively. Consider placing thoughts about your vacation spot and plans into separate paragraphs.
cohesion
Use more transition words to improve the flow of your sentences, making them easier to follow.
task achievement
The invitation to your friend is warm and friendly, which is great for a personal letter.
task achievement
You included specific details about the vacation spot that help the reader visualize the experience.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite