The pie charts below show the percentage of European adults engaging in various entertainment activities with family and friends in 1985 and 1995. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the percentage of European adults engaging in various entertainment activities with family and friends in 1985 and 1995. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of various entertaining activities with both family and friends talking, eating out, watching TV, playing computer games, and others. among European adults in 1985 and in 1995.
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it is clear from the graph that watching television was the most popular activity ,
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, other activities were the least preferred
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European adults. In 1985 leisure activities of European adults represented a significant percentage
in
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watching
Tv
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TV
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. Following it, the
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loved eating out by 23%.
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, a slight rate
with
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teenager
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a teenager
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who
practiced
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talking with their family.
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contrast, in 1995, playing computer games was performed around 27%.
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, 30% the average of
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who
liked
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watching TV
screen
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.
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, the number of students who talked with their friends more than students who talked with their relatives.
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, only a gradual proportion of
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teenager
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teenagers
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who
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ate outside.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words teenager with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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