The pie chart illustrates the outcome of
survey
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a survey
the survey
into
the popularity of types of leisure activities of European adults between 1985 to 1995, over the period of 10 years.
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on
Overall
, the highest Linking Words
rate
was watching television in 1980, Use synonyms
whereas
the lowest Linking Words
rate
was other in both years, Use synonyms
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hand
the percentage of eating out increased Add the comma(s)
hand,
in1985
,Correct your spelling
in 1985
while
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rate
of talking Use synonyms
family
decreased in 1995.
Looking at the details, the ratio of watching TV was 32 % in 1985 and almost nearly the same in 1995 , at 30 Change preposition
to family
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percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
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however
the lowest Add a comma
however,
rate
of Use synonyms
other
was 6 Fix the agreement mistake
others
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percent
in 1985. 21 % of talking with friends in 1985 and the Change the spelling
per cent
rate
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rise
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rose
little
to 26 Correct article usage
a little
percent
in 1995.the proportion of eating out was 23 %. Use synonyms
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on
the contrary, the ratio in 1995 Capitalize word
On
was fall
sharply to 8 %.
Looking at more details, we can notice that in 1995 Change the verb form
fell
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rate
of playing computer games was 27 Correct article usage
the rate
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percent
,Change the spelling
per cent
while
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no
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not
compered
in 1980 .Correct your spelling
compared
in addition
to that, the proportion of talking with family was 7 % , Linking Words
furthermore
the Linking Words
rate
in 1985 jumped to 18 Use synonyms
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percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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