The following two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities with European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities with European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the outcome of
survey
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a survey
the survey
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into
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the popularity of types of leisure activities of European adults between 1985 to 1995, over the period of 10 years.
Overall
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, the highest
rate
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was watching television in 1980,
whereas
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the lowest
rate
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was other in both years,
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hand
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the percentage of eating out increased
in1985
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in 1985
,
while
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the
rate
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of talking
family
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decreased in 1995. Looking at the details, the ratio of watching TV was 32 % in 1985 and almost nearly the same in 1995 , at 30
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percent
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,
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however
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however,
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the lowest
rate
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of
other
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others
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was 6
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percent
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per cent
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in 1985. 21 % of talking with friends in 1985 and the
rate
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rise
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rose
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little
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to 26
percent
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in 1995.the proportion of eating out was 23 %.
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on
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the contrary, the ratio in 1995
was fall
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sharply to 8 %. Looking at more details, we can notice that in 1995
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rate
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the rate
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of playing computer games was 27
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percent
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per cent
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,
while
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no
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not
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compered
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compared
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in 1980 .
in addition
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to that, the proportion of talking with family was 7 % ,
furthermore
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the
rate
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in 1985 jumped to 18
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percent
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per cent
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • popularity
  • leisure activities
  • European adults
  • significant rise
  • steady
  • collectively
  • slight increase
  • emerged
  • accounting for
  • percentage of people
  • new leisure activity
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