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he chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart shows the proportion of female school leavers going increased education in the United Kingdom , USA, Australia, South Korea and France between 1980 and 2015 years.
Overall
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, the highest level was Australia in both years and
USA
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 in 2015 years. The lowest was South Korea in 1980.
On the other hand
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, the rate in the UK increased in 2015.
Whereas
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 ,it was decreased in 1980. Looking at the details, the ratio of Australia was higher level nearly 58 % in 1980 and 2015.
However
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, the rate in the USA was almost 38
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 in 1980.
In addition
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 to that, it jumped rose approximately 58 % in 2015. Looking at more details , we can notice that, the percentage of France was half two quarters and little increased about 54 percent in 2015.
On the contrary
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 , the proportion of South Korea declined level almost 25% in 1980.
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, it went up 30 percent in 2015.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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