The diagram below represents a survey on whether consumers would actually consider buying cars from tech companies such as Apple & Google. Summarise the information given in the diagram.

The diagram below represents a survey on whether consumers would actually consider buying cars from tech companies such as Apple & Google. Summarise the information given in the diagram.
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The bar chart illustrates the results of a survey regarding the opinions on buying cars from tech companies
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Apple and Google of consumers in specific countries at different ages.
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the vast majority of those who support the idea, are citizens from India, China, and Brazil,
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people living in France, Germany, the USA, and the UK do not like it as commonly.
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, young citizens
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the age of 18 to 34 would most frequently consider acquiring the cars,
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their 50s and over, would do
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more rarely. Focusing first on the percentage of consumers in different areas,
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60 to 80 per cent of the population residing in India, China, and Brazil, gave positive responses, as opposed to the British, American, German, and French people, with roughly 25 to 30 per cent of those who are willing to buy these vehicles. As for the age groups, 65% of people at the age of between 18 and 34 years old consider that the new products from tech companies are attractive to them,
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nearly 50% and 25% of survey participants aged 35 to 49 and over 50 think so.

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