Cars come in all different shapes and sizes. Some prefer a large one, while others a compact one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each type and which would you prefer?

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Vehicles play a significant role in facilitating

peoples'

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people's

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lives.

For

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this

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reason, Many people believe that owning a

big size

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four wheels four-wheel-drive

car

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is important,

while

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others think a small

car

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is enough to serve their needs. In

this

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essay, I will discuss the positive and negative impacts of both types.

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, I will explain why I recommend a vehicle with minimum load capacity rather than a huge

one

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, Extended families with a large number of family members need to have

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apply

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transportion

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transportation

facilities that not only help them to move from

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one

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place to another but

also

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reduce the number of trips when

traveling

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travelling

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, my friend lives with her mother, father, sisters, brothers, and their kids. When they went to a restaurant in Toronto, they could all go together in

one

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car

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with no need to make two trips, which saves money, time, and energy. In

this

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case,

this

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shows a great impact on the community

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they

also

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stress that

one

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trip will cause less damage

for

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environment

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and reduce the traffic jam in the big cities.

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, those who favour the small vehicles' capacity emphasize that people should follow a healthy lifestyle and limit their dependency on technology to move from

one

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place to another.

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, my father is 60 years old, and he always chooses to walk

for

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shopping as he strongly believes that it is not only improving his health well

being

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well-being

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but

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maitain

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maintaining

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apply

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friendly

the

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environmental habits.

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a result, a mini economical

car

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is enough to

fulfill

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the basic needs. In my opinion, saving money and purchasing a small

car

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have

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has

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healthu

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healthier

effect on

indiviuals

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individuals

and society.

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, I suggest that governments may reduce the cost of the mini transportation machines to encourage people

saving

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their money and community.

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language

Ensure all sentences are complete and grammatical. For example, 'transportion facilities' should be 'transportation facilities'.

structure

Make sure to introduce your main points clearly in your introduction and to summarize them in your conclusion.

lexical resource

Consider varying your vocabulary. Instead of repeating 'small car', use synonyms or describe features.

content

Your examples are relevant and help illustrate your points well, providing a clear understanding of your argument.

task

Your writing reflects a clear opinion and recommendation on the type of vehicle preferred, which aligns well with the task requirements.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

306 words

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