Nowadays, some individuals think that our
relies on the amount of
we have,
others believe that
cannot buy
. I firmly believe that
is
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with
,
it can buy you
a Remove the article
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peace of mind, and remove the stress about
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your need
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every month. In
essay, I will discuss
matter in detail.
with, having
is vital to have
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.
, to have the best healthcare, education,
and Correct word choice
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houses...etc, you
are requireChange the verb form
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to have at
lessReplace the word
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6 figure income.
, poor people are facing
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difficult challenges in every aspect of their
, when it comes to living in unsafe neighborhoods, cannot afford healthcare, and the low quality of education in poor
areaFix the agreement mistake
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. As
resultCorrect article usage
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,
can make
individualsChange noun form
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lifeFix the agreement mistake
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easier and happier, and avoid hardship that lack of resources
bringCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to anyone's
.
, owning
decentCorrect article usage
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amount of
can release you from stressing out about
every month.
, people with low incomes
are always stressChange the verb form
are always stressed
are always stressing
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out, because they are fearing to lose their job
speciallyReplace the word
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in our current
economicReplace the word
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.
, the price of basic like rent,
foodsFix the agreement mistake
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and
hadWrong verb form
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been rising in
resentCorrect your spelling
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years.
, stressing out the fear of losing basic
needFix the agreement mistake
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will
madeChange the verb form
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any person more depressed.
In conclusion,
is important to have a good
without stress out about making your
endFix the agreement mistake
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meetsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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, and have the best things that
can offer to you. I think
is essential for good mental health and
.