you are attending part-time classes at a school but will be absent for a few days. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter, you should: explain why you are taking part-time classes. describe the reason for your absence. explain how you plan to keep up with the missed lessons

Dear teacher  My name is

ashir syal

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Ashir Syal

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i am a student of

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studying in class 8  , just want to draw your attention towards my absence from

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for

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due

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due

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to my muscle tear during my basketball practice session.

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was for net practice court after my classes finished as all days but yesterday

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sometime

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training

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start

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experiencing severe leg pain

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which

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was not even able to walk

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with little cramps but

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avoid

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it at first place seems to be fine first but pain increase suddenly so my teammates immediately rushed me to doctor.

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as per

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am advised to be on

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for a week.  

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will be attending my

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part time

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part-time

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during

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recovery period as

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cant

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can't

fold my legs for

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time.

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also

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better to stay home to avoid any crowd interaction which could

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may be

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during lunch break or

mid breaks

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too

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keep up with the sessions

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planned to

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notes from Andy for

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following week

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to make sure that

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took notes of all important lectures. I hope to get

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recovery so

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am able to get back

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school

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as soon as possible.

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for understanding.

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apologise for any inconvenience and hope to receive

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response from you soon