Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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A lot of people agree that
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government
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needs to focus on and financially support the idea of life on another
planet
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,
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others believe
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a non-useful idea and wasting of
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public time and
money
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as there are a lot of
problems
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surrounding the
earth
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's
planet
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. In my opinion,
government
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money
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sources need to be spent on solving community
problems
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. The idea of searching for signs of life on another
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planet
could help
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overpopulation
problems
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.
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, people living on
earth
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been increasing with minimum space to stay on it ,
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of that crowding and traffic become a serious issue in a large country, looking for another
planet
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could solve
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problem. Another reason to keep looking for another place to start living is the different types of pollution on
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that lead to chronic health
problems
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.
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, air pollution leads to chronic asthma that affects adults and children, so we need to look for other clean places. The search for another
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for these reasons can lead to economic
problems
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as it is very
exensive
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expensive
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and has unpredictable results because no water or oxygen outside our
planet
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. The
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should focus on more realistic projects to improve our community.
Money
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and time must be spent on health care to improve
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sector.
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, we need to build hospitals and research
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for untreatable diseases. Another aspect the
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need to work on is the educational aspect , uneducated people should have the opportunity to complete their studies freely. A special financial budget for building more schools and universities to improve society. These significant goals are important to achieve the vision of our country with a highly predictable result. In conclusion, working on the vision of living on another
planetcould
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planet
lead
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to the loss of all the
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energy without any benefits,
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spending
money
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and time on helping to improve the quality of life on
earth
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is more important ,
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the excellent predictable results .

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task achievement
Consider providing more balanced arguments for each side of the discussion. This will show a more comprehensive understanding of the topic.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph clearly supports the main argument and includes topic sentences to enhance clarity and flow.
coherence and cohesion
Work on grammatical accuracy, especially with plurals and sentence structure. This will improve clarity and readability.
task achievement
You have presented your opinion clearly and supported it with some relevant reasons.
The essay structure is there, with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, which is good for coherence and cohesion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented opportunities
  • extraterrestrial
  • satisfy human curiosity
  • practical benefits
  • inspiring goal
  • testament to human ambition
  • pursuit of knowledge
  • critics argue
  • imprudent
  • plague Earth
  • immediate attention
  • allocated for
  • environmental conservation
  • well-being
  • quality of life
  • balanced approach
  • advancements
  • benefits for humanity
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