The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Write the essay in 150 words.

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The two maps compare the

city

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of Stockford between two different periods, in 1986 and now.

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, significant changes have occurred in Stockford

City

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from agricultural land to a residential region,

while

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some areas have remained unchanged, maintaining accessibility to the

city

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. The most noticeable developments are cutting down all farmlands and gardens to build new households.

However

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, the large house on the right side has been replaced by a retirement home and an extended school

due to

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the increasing number of citizens.

Furthermore

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the

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new road has been added to

make

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provide

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access to the new retirement house. Despite these changes, some areas have remained the same; the Stock River and the bridge continue to serve humans commuting in the

city

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while

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the post office in the

center

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next to the shops in 1986 has been preserved for general use.

Moreover

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, the two shops were demolished to construct new accommodation.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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