The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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galance
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glance
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at the line graph presented describes the comparison of fertility
percentage
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percentages
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between two countries which are
Chinas
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China
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and America in 8 decades from 1920 to 2000. In general, Both nations have gone through
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a flunction
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flunction
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function
functions
in birth
rate
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, with
lowest
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the lowest
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rate
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during the 1940s and
highest
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the highest
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rate
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during the 1960s. Climbing from approximately 10
percent
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in 1920 to 15
percent
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in 1935, China's birth
rate
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plunged to around 5
percent
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in
1940s
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the 1940s
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. After about 5 years of
a
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steadiness
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it had rocketed to 20
percent
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in 1950. The latter half of
century
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the century
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;
however
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, brought a downward trend in
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figure. The US birth
rate
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, meanwhile,
osillated
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oscillated
between 11 and 13 prior to 1940. After
that
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is
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it
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declined to somewhere in the
viciniy
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vicinity
of 5
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percent
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per cent
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in 1945, but it saw
rapid
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a rapid
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rose to reach a peak of 15
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percent
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per cent
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in
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the nest
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nest
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next
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5 years. in the next 5
decades
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decades,
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it had a descending trend to reach about 3
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percent
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per cent
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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