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Academic plagiarism has become a pressing issue in many countries today. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

Nowadays, the number of fraud cases in
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 or in
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 is constantly increasing.
People
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 start to not believe in themselves and try to find
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 which can help them to cheat in exams.
This
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plagiarism
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 is getting more and more popular
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 describe the possible
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 it. The foremost cause of academic
plagiarism
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 is easy access to information. Artificial Intelligence has become accessible to all
people
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. These days,
students
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 do not have to find much information by themselves because AI can find it in a faster way. Another reason is laziness.
Students
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 want to have more free time and meet with friends or just lie down in bed than prepare for lessons.
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, more and more
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 have a lower level of education and can do things which they get in university or school.
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, a lot of
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 are afraid of failure. Parents, environment and teachers always push
students
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 to be the best version of themselves. Because of that,
people
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 do not believe in their abilities and start to plagiarize from other sources.
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, there are some possible
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. One major solution is that there must be lectures
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which would talk about academic
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.
Such
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students
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to
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understand that
plagiarism
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 is not a good thing and that
students
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 should do work or exercises by themselves and believe in their abilities.
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, universities should do lessons in which
students
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 can learn about critical thinking.
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 lessons can help them to understand that academic
plagiarism
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 is a bad thing.
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, there should be strict consequences. If teachers find that
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 use things which are not allowed,
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To sum up
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, academic
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 has become a really big problem and it is because of easy access to information,
people
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's laziness and fear of failure.
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, there are possible
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,
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 as lectures in which will
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talk about
plagiarism
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 consequences.
Hence
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, I believe that academic
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 should be stopped.

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Provide more specific examples to support your arguments. For instance, mention particular AI tools or historical statistics about plagiarism rates.
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Improve the coherence of your paragraphs by using more linking words and phrases to help the reader follow your argument more easily.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your introduction and conclusion clearly reflect the main points discussed in the essay. A stronger conclusion can further summarize the arguments made in the essay.
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The essay addresses the topic and provides relevant causes and solutions, demonstrating a good understanding of the issue.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plagiarism
  • academic integrity
  • digital resources
  • citation
  • educational institutions
  • cultural differences
  • intentional plagiarism
  • unintentional plagiarism
  • academic pressure
  • training
  • individual ownership of ideas
  • educational goals
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