The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
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the global
market
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share
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of
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smartphone producers in 2005 and 2006.
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, it can be seen that a few
manufactures
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consistently dominated the
market
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,
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other companies only occupied a small part of the
share
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. Nokia
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almost one-third (32.5%) of the mobile phone
market
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in 2005. The percentage of it increased to 35% in the subsequence year. The rising trend could
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be seen in the
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distribution of Motoria, which increased its
share
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by 3.4% between 2005 and 2006.
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the percentage for Samsung slightly dropped by 0.9%, it still occupied more than 10% of the
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. Other brands,
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, shared less than 10% of the mobile phone
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. The
share
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for Sony Ericson increased by 1.1%, but it was still lower than the top three companies in 2006. The percentage of the
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share
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of L.G. and BenQ Mobile decreased in 2006
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compared to 2005. Eventually, the total
market
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share
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of these 3 companies (16.1%) was less than that of Nokia (35%) or
Motorla
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Motorola
(21.7%) in 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words market, share with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • market share
  • dominance
  • manufacturers
  • market position
  • consumer preference
  • product development
  • growth
  • stable
  • decrease/increase
  • comparative analysis
  • data trends
  • global market
  • mobile phone industry
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