The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the growth cycle of the Monarch butterfly.
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, it can be seen that its life can be divided
to
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into
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4 stages, which are the egg
state
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stage
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, larval
stage
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, pupal
stage
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and adult
stage
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. Butterflies are laid on milkweed. Two weeks later, the
eggs
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egg
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becomes a newly hatched larva. Before it can fly, the larval
stage
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is undergone. The creature grows as a caterpillar on milkweed.
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,
larva
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the larva
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is attached. During the process called chrysalis, the 10-day period serves as a transition between
larval
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the larval
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stage
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and
pupal
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the pupal
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stage
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. 10 days later,
pupal
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the pupal
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stage
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is reached and the creature starts its emergence as an adult, allowing it to fly. When the process is done, it migrates to the south. Half
year
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a year
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later, it goes back to the north, in order to mate and lay eggs. New butterflies will be
borned
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born
and the process is repeated for every Monarch butterfly as a cycle.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
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