In some areas of the US teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night. What is your opinion about this?

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Subject: Booking Inquiry for Family Holiday Accommodation Dear [Hotel Manager's Name], I hope

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message finds you well. I am writing to inquire about booking a stay at your hotel for a family holiday at the seaside. A friend of mine recently recommended your establishment, and we are very interested in making arrangements for our visit. We are looking for accommodation for [number of people, e.g., four] people, including [specific types of rooms you need, e.g., two double rooms, or one family suite]. Our intended stay is from [check-in date] to [check-out date], and we would appreciate

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you could confirm availability during these dates. Could you please provide details on what is included in the price of the stay? Specifically, we would like to know if breakfast, any meals, or access to certain facilities are included in the rate.

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, I would be grateful if you could inform me about the activities and places of interest near the hotel. Our family is eager to explore the surrounding area, and any recommendations you may have would be very helpful. Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to your response and hope to finalize our booking soon. Warm regards, [Your Name] [Your Contact Information]

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Your essay addresses the question and presents your opinion clearly. However, to improve, consider expanding on your ideas with more specific examples or reasons to support your opinion.

coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph flows logically to the next. Using clear topic sentences and transitional phrases can enhance the coherence of your argument.

coherence cohesion

The introduction effectively sets the context and presents a clear opinion on the matter.

task achievement

The essay maintains a formal tone and appropriate vocabulary throughout, which adds to its professionalism.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

204 words

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In some areas of the US teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night. What is your opinion about this?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Write a letter to the local council about plans to close a children's playground in your area in your letter, you should: -say why children are not using the playground -Explain how important the playground is for the local community -Suggest how the playground could be improved

You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you are selling - describe the furniture - suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the enviroment. What do you think can be done to solve this issue?