Topic 2. Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can't sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter describe the problem with the dog explain why it is important for you to sleep  outline what your neighbours could do about the situation.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about the problem I am facing at

night

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due to

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your

dog

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barking noise. I

have

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apply

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rented a house beside your home

last

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month and I noticed, you

are

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have been

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chaining your

dog

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in the backyard at

night

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from

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for

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many days. I believe, might be because of

cold

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the cold

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your

dog

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bark

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barks

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a lot at

night

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which

make

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makes

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difficult to sleep.

Actually

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I am a truck driver by profession and I have to start my work early in the morning.

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, proper sleep is very necessary for me to drive well

through out

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throughout

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the day.

Beacuse

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Because

of not getting enough rest, sometimes it can be hard to

make

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concentration

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concentrate

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on driving which can be dangerous for both

public

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the public

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as well as

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me. To solve

this

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issue, you should keep your

dog

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inside the house so that he can

also

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sleep well.

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, if you feed him before going to bed it will ensure that he will not be

hungary

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hungry

Hungary

night

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Hopefully, you will understand my situation and will

coperate

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cooperate

with us. Best wishes, Manoj Kumar

manojkansal30Wed Apr 02 2025

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task achievement

Consider providing more details about how the dog’s barking affects your daily life to help your neighbors understand the urgency.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to check your spelling and grammar throughout the letter for a more polished presentation.

task achievement

You've clearly stated the issue with your neighbor's dog and expressed why sleep is important for you.

coherence and cohesion

The structure of your letter is clear, with logical paragraphs distinguishing different points.

7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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