You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: -describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight -explain how missing your flight impacted you -clearly state what you would like the airline to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my
disappoinment
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disappointment
with your airline, causing
deley
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delay
in my international travel. I have booked your plane seat for travelling to
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on
5th
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of
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to attend an important business meeting. Unfortunately, I missed that flight because of
heavy
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the heavy
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crowd on
check in
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check-in
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line. online
check in
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facility was not provided by
company
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the company
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.
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, I was not able to collect my boarding pass on time, resulting
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of flight. It had
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a greater
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effect on my business as I had missed
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mandatory
takh
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task
related to my
upcomming
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upcoming
project.
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, our company lost that
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proposal
, causing
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per cent decline in profits.
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, It
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impacted our
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with
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as they do not want to
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working with us. I would like to suggest
you
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apply
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that
online
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an online
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check in
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check-in
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system should be implemented. So that, a long
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queue
can be reduced some extent I
hopping
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, you will take
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appropriate action on
this
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matter and will try to resolve
this
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issue for future
traveller
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.
Your
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sincerely, Manoj Kumar

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writing tone
Make sure to maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter.
task achievement
Try to include specific details about the flight (e.g., flight number, time) to enhance your explanation.
coherence
Work on organizing your ideas more clearly, focusing on one main point per paragraph.
general
Proofread your letter to correct spelling and grammatical errors.
content
You clearly described the problem you faced with the check-in process.
content
You addressed the impact of missing your flight effectively.
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