The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.
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The table illustrates the
pencentage
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percentage
of
activities
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that the UK unemployed chose to do
in
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last
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year.
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, Most
women
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did
housework
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in the morning,
while
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the majority of
men
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hunted
jobs
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for jobs
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.
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, the highest proportion of
women
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was doing
housework
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in the
afternoon
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.
Conversely
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, the most common
afternoon
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activity for
men
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was watching TV. Almost half of
women
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did
housework
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in the morning, followed by shopping and job hunting.
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also
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experienced
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similar trend,
housework
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, shopping, and job hunting were the top three most common
activities
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in the morning, accounting for 19%, 20%, and 22% respectively. Other
activities
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contibuted
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contributed
no more than 15% for both
women
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and
men
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. In terms of
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afternoon
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activities
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,
housework
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remained the most popular for
women
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,
while
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the number of
men
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shifted to TV.
However
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, there were no noticeable differences among
activities
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.
Men
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spent their time
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gardening almost at the same level as TV. The number of
women
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visiting friends or relatives increased in the
afternoon
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, making it the
second highest
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percentage of time
spending
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, women, housework, men, afternoon with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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