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Some people believe that because of Modemn technology, it is no longer Necessary For people to lean handwriting Skills, but others think that handwriting is Still an important Skill. Discuss both vieas and give your opinion.

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manual work from an individual's life.
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, there are predominantly two Contrasting Views where a section of society claims that
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 emphasize that handwriting will never be outdated I believe that achieving traditional
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 for everyone. Apparently, some communities are not in the Favor of hand writing
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 that recent
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technologies
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 and computer gadgets
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 which write clear messages in multiple
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Secondly
, many people Who Can Not read and write cursive or Chinese
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handwriting
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notes during
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. In conclusion, I largely
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believe
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believe
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handwriting
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hand writing
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 expertise are indeed too great,
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frequent
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traditional
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traditional
 writing habits alleviates memory power

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task achievement
Ensure that the introduction clearly states your opinion and outlines the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the clarity and flow of your ideas. Use linking words and phrases to connect sentences and paragraphs more effectively.
language accuracy
Check spelling and grammar carefully to avoid distracting the reader. Small errors can affect the overall impression of your essay.
content
You have presented both sides of the argument, which is important for a balanced discussion.
content
You make some valid points about the importance of handwriting, demonstrating an understanding of the topic.

Fully explain your ideas

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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