You went to your friend house and had meal. Write a letter to your friend thanking him and his family for the meal. 1) Tell what you enjoyed about the meal. 2) Thanks to his parents and what you think about them 3) suggest arrangements for his invite at your place.

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Dear Frank, It’s been a pleasure visiting your home. I had

great

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time with your family. I really appreciate it. The food was so mouth-watering and I got introduced to the north-

indian

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Indian

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cuisine which I never tasted in my life. I never

know

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knew

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the

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that

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north-indian

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Indian

cuisine has ample

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apply

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varieties.

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, the food was great and I loved each and every dish that you served.

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particular

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particular,

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I wanted to talk about the desert called ‘Kheer’ that was mind-blowing. I’m so grateful to meet

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a lovely parents

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lovely parents

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. They are so kind-hearted and welcoming. I felt like a home and they treated me like their own son. I really learned some hospitality from your parents. As we planned,

this

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time I would like to arrange a get-together party at my house.

Firstly

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, I planned to start the day with Hiking the famous peak in my hometown where we get to spot many wildlife animals.

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followed by playing some indoor games at my home like Carrom, Chess and watching movies.

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Finally

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a good South-Indian dinner will be arranged. Hope you like

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plan. I cannot wait to spend my whole day with you. Looking forward to

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you

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dear friend. Cheers!

sowmya madhavanFri Apr 04 2025

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Task Achievement

Ensure all sentences are grammatically correct and use appropriate vocabulary. For instance, 'I never know' should be 'I never knew'.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to group related ideas together more clearly by using connecting words to enhance the flow between thoughts.

Positive Highlight

The warm and friendly tone of the letter is very inviting, making it enjoyable to read.

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The detailed description of the meal shows a strong engagement with the experience, which is commendable.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

203 words

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Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people it is waste of time when plan for future it is more important to focus on present .do you agree or disagree .