A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantaged of tourism in the modern world?

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keeping up with time, In terms of advantages the current era has many developments that certainly contribute to the superiority of tourism in many aspects

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Ensure that your thesis statement clearly outlines the main points you will discuss in the essay. This helps in setting the reader's expectations for your argument.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the organization of ideas within paragraphs to enhance clarity. Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to guide the reader through your argument.

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Make sure to provide specific examples to support your main points. This will strengthen your argument and make it more persuasive.

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You have identified the significance of tourism and the potential risks associated with it, which demonstrates good insight into the topic.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

sustainable tourism
ecotourism
heritage sites
hospitality industry
tourist influx
cultural commodification
ecological footprint
economic diversification
carrying capacity
cultural sensitivity
destination marketing
travel advisories
visitor management
impact assessment
tourism revenues
authentic experience
visitor satisfaction
conservation efforts
seasonal fluctuation
social sustainability

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantaged of tourism in the modern world?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for community. Why might be this is the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Having more money and less time is better than earning less money and having more time Discuss both the view points and state your opinion

Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say • Explain what caused the damage • Why do you need them to fix the problem right away • What needs to be done to fix it

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?