The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration shows how
ethanol
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, a type of biofuel, is manufactured in a circular flow.
Overall
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, there are three main steps to produce
ethanol
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from
material
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the material
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, process, and use stages.
Firstly
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, the source materials come from
the
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plants and trees, which absorb sunlight and carbon dioxide to grow.
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, they are harvested to be processed
for
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two continual stages. The initial one is to process them into cellulose, and the second one is to convert them into sugars.
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, the final product,
ethanol
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, is produced by the
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step of adding microbes. In the use stage of
ethanol
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, it is available in various types of vehicles,
such
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as
automobile
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, cargo, and aircraft.
During the
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burning of
ethanol
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,
it
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apply
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not only
provide
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provides
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the power to mobilize the traffic tool
,
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but
also
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release
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releases
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carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, becoming the energy source for the plantation to grow.
Therefore
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, the production flow of
ethanol
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creates
a
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the
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shape of
circle
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a circle
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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