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The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents.

The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents.
The given bar graph compares the duration
kids
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 spend
time
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 with their
parents
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 on
weekdays
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 and at
weekends
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.
Overall
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, the total duration children spend with their family is slightly higher at
weekends
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, compared to on
weekdays
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. On
weekdays
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, mothers tend to look after their
kids
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 by themselves in
weekdays
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.
By contrast
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, fathers seldom spend
time
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 with their sons and daughters, regardless of
weekdays
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 or
weekends
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.
Nevertheless
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, in most households, dads are willing to play with their
kids
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along with
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 moms at
weekends
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. On
weekdays
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,
while
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parents
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 spend almost one-third of the day with their
kids
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, the majority of the
time
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, moms are responsible for looking after their
kids
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, for around 6 hours.
On the other hand
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, dads only spend about 1.5 hours with their
kids
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.
In addition
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, at
weekends
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,
it is clear that
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parents
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 spend more
time
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 with their children, which is gently longer than on
weekdays
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, by nearly 60 to 120 minutes. Interestingly,
instead
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 of dads alone, in most families,
parents
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 prefer to play with their
kids
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 together, spending more than 4 hours.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kids, time, parents, weekdays, weekends with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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