The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the percentage of
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audience
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the audience
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who show radio and
television
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in
United
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the United
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Kingdom in 1992.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that watching
television
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was the most popular activity with the
people
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in 1992.
Wheres
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Where
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the radio was the least
favouit
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favourite
choice among the
audience
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. At midnight, the
people
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who
was
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were
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listening to the audio
around
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were around
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5%.
However
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, there was a significant
increase
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of
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in
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the
audience
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who
loves
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loved
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hearing the audio at midnight.
At
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10.00 to 12.00, the proportion of those
audience
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reached about 7% at 12.00 and
approximatley
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approximately
8% at 12.00.
In contrast
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, the
time
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between 6.00 to 2.00, there was a significant
increase
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of
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in
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the
listeners
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number of listeners
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who preferred
listen
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to listen
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to audio at noon. As we notice
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apply
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by 25% the percentage of a number of
people
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who like it hearing their audio in
this
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time
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.
On the other hand
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the number of
people
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who
watched
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watch
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the
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apply
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television
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more
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is more
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than the
people
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who
hearing
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hear
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the audio
through
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throughout
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the year. Particularly
at
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from
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4.00 to 2.00 o'clock at midnight the proportion of watchers who loved
watched
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watching
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television
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program
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programs
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in
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at
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this
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time
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was
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substantial
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substantially increased
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increase
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and they reached
to
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apply
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a peak.
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, the
time
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between 4.00 to 8.00 o'clock
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represented a sharp
increase
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with
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in
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the
people
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who preferred
television
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rather than audio media.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words audience, television, people, increase, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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