The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart reveals the change in the percentage of
residents
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who live in cities
has
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having
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buying and drinking habits
coffee
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and
tea
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in five different cities in
Australian
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Australia
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.
Overall
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, it is crystal clear that the percentage of people
bought
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who bought
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instant
coffee
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in the
last
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four
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weeks
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rises
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rose
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steadily
while
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the number of citizens
bought
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who bought
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fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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four
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weeks
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drop
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dropped
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.
city
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City
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residents
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who went to a café for
coffee
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or
tea
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in the
last
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four
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weeks
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always
the
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had the
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highest point, compared with others. The figure for a survey about
citizens'
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citizens
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coffee
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and
tea
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that go to a café for
coffee
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and
tea
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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in Melbourne reaches a peak of nearly 56%.
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,
this
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data in Adelaide hit a bottom,
stand
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standing
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at about 35%. Hobart is the second city which has the number of people who went to a café for a drink made
by
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of
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coffee
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or
tea
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in the
last
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four
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weeks
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, at around the same level as Melbourne. There is the highest number of nearly 45% in the proportion of city
residents
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in Sydney that bought fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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four
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weeks
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. Brisbane and Adelaide witness the lowest point of about 35%. about people
bought
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buying
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instant
coffee
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in the
last
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four
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weeks
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, the percentage of urban
residents
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in Hobart
stand
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stands
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at nearly 55%, where the highest common compared with other cities in
Australian
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Australia
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words residents, coffee, tea, four, weeks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • preferences
  • café culture
  • survey results
  • comparable
  • indicate
  • reflect
  • regional
  • cultural influences
  • drinking habits
  • percentage
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