You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing

this

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letter to

apologe

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apologize

apologise

for playing music yesterday night at the high volume. I

recieved

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received

your

compain

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complaint

in the morning regarding the volume of

music

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the music

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. I cleared

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the RN

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exam

last

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week. My friends came

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my home to celebrate my achievement. I organized a party to celebrate my achievement. My friends came

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my home to make

this

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moment special and they played loud music for the purpose of dancing. They were totally unaware that our neighbours

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were

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disturbing

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disturbed

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from

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it. I am quite

shamed

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ashamed

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for disturbing you. I am pretty sure, it

would

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will

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not happen in the future. I hope you will understand my circumstances.

Your

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Yours

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Sincerely, Rupinder Kaur.

rupindersamrow222Fri Apr 04 2025

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language

Ensure correct spelling (e.g., 'apologise', 'received', 'complain').

coherence

Consider structuring your paragraphs with a clearer focus on each point, for example separating the reason for the noise and the apology.

language

Use more varied vocabulary to enhance your writing. For instance, instead of repeating 'my friends came to my home', you could say 'my friends gathered at my place'.

content

You effectively explained the reason for the loud music and expressed regret for the disturbance.

formatting

The letter has a polite closing, which is appropriate for the situation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

116 words

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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