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Band 5.5

Some people think that professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in their home country. Others think that they should be free to work in another country. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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There is no denying the fact that some people believe
engineers
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doctors
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 should be free to
work
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 in another
country
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, others think
engineers
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 and
doctors
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 be required to
work
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 in the
country
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 where they did their training.
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 it is a commonly held belief that some nations believe
doctors
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 and
engineers
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 should
work
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 in the
country
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 where they did their training, there is
also
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 an argument that other people think other professionals, like
engineers
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 and
doctors
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, should feel free to
work
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 in another
country
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.
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 essay will analyse
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 topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, the workers who
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 in the
country
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 where they did their training have many benefits.
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, the workers who
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 in the
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 have many benefits like living close to their families.
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, identical situations and atmospheres.
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, the same habits and the same language.
On the other hand
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, professionals, like
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 and
engineers
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 who
work
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 in other countries,
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 have some great points. It is possible to say that high salaries and attractive incentives.
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, learned about new cultures and situations.
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,
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 can examine new cases, and
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engineers
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. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
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 question. On balance,
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, I tend to believe that the workers who
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task achievement
Improve the clarity of your ideas by providing more detailed explanations and examples to support your arguments.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure your essay follows a logical structure; clearly separate different arguments and points.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to revise your grammar and punctuation for smoother reading and better comprehension.
task achievement
The essay provides a balanced view by discussing both sides of the argument, which is a strong point.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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