The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the production flow from
sugar
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cane to
sugar
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we consume in our daily lives. In general, there are 7 main steps in the
manufaturing
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manufacturing
process
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, which
involves
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physical, biological, and chemical
treament
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treatment
. It begins with the
planation
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plantation
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of
sugar
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cane and ends with the production of
sugar
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. The first step of making
sugar
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is growing
sugar
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canes
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cane
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for 12-18 months to reach its maturity.
Then
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, the harvest comes in two different ways. One is harvested by the machinery in a massive number at one time. Another method is reaped by the farmers who cut them down by hand, taking more time and labour force to complete the task. Once harvested, the ripe
sugar
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canes are
then
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crushed into juice by the machine,
served
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serving
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as the
prepartion
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preparation
work done before undergoing
to
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apply
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the chemical
process
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.
The following step is
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to
purifying
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purify
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juice by filtering through
limesone
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limestone
, and the filtered liquid is heated by the evaporator to generate syrup. After the heating
process
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,
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sugar
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the sugar
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cystal
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crystal
is separated from
syrup
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the syrup
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, which is called
centrifuge
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a centrifuge
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. The
last
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process
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is drying and cooling, and the final product of
sugar
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is successfully produced.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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