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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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 of
statistic
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 about
sales
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 of
Fairtrade labelled
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Fairtrade-labelled
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 coffee and bananas between 1999 to 2004. The provided information compared a total
sales
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 each year of
a
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five European countries including Switzerland,
UK
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the UK
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, Belgium, Sweden, and Denmark. Focusing on information about
coffee’s
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coffee
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sales
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, all of the countries’
sales
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 have gradually
increase
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.
To be more
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 specifically, Britain’s coffee Fairtrade
sales
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 have
sigificantlly
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significantly
growth
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 from 1.5 to 20
millions
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million
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of
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euros between 1999 to 2004.
While
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,
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 other countries have
a
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gradually increased
of
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Fairtrade
sales
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 by twice
amout
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amount
about
 over half of a decade.
In contrast
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, the
sales
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 of bananas in the five
Euporean
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Korean
 countries have frustrated change over time. There
are
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 minor growth in
UK
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the UK
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 and Belgium. In comparison, Switzerland has a
dramatically
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 growth from 15 to 47
millions
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million
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of
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euros between 1999 to 2004.
However
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, Sweden and Denmark’s
sales
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 have declined moderately over half of a decade. Interestingly, There are major increase
of
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sales
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 in most of the
country
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countries
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whereas
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 some of the countries’
sales
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 are unchanging and declined moderately.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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