A glance at the tables given illustrates the
reasons
why Use synonyms
people
giving up the smoking habit and the time when the smoker Use synonyms
intend
to give up. Based on an Correct subject-verb agreement
intends
overall
perspective, it can be seen that getting better for Linking Words
health
in general attains the first place for the Use synonyms
reasons
why smokers stop their habit, Use synonyms
while
the present Linking Words
health
problems Use synonyms
obtains
the Change the verb form
obtain
last
position. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
stop
their smoking habit within a half year Correct pronoun usage
who stop
reaches
Correct subject-verb agreement
reach
the
first place, whilst within a month Correct article usage
apply
gets
the Correct subject-verb agreement
get
last
spot.
From an initial figure, the foremost Linking Words
Use synonyms
reasons
for stopping smoking is getting better for Fix the agreement mistake
reason
health
in general Use synonyms
by
71%, where mostly Change preposition
apply
people
who smoked fewer than 10 cigarettes Use synonyms
achieves
the highest percentage Correct subject-verb agreement
achieve
by
74%. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, less risk of getting Linking Words
smoking- related
sickness attains the second position by 25%, Correct your spelling
smoking-related
where
moderate cigarettes smoked (10-19 cigarettes) gets the highest Correct word choice
whereas
positions
by 28%. Fix the agreement mistake
position
Subsequently
, the next Linking Words
reasons
are considerations of finance Use synonyms
by
31%, the pressure from family Change preposition
apply
by
16% ,and present Change preposition
apply
health
problems Use synonyms
by
12%, Change preposition
apply
subsequently
.
Fron the next table, Linking Words
people
intended to give up smoking within a half year Use synonyms
reaches
the highest quota Correct subject-verb agreement
reach
by
35%. The next positions are within a year by 21% and within a month by 12%. The total smokers who intended to give up Change preposition
of
gains
Wrong verb form
gained
highest
quota by 71%. Correct article usage
the highest
On the other hand
, Linking Words
people
who do not try to give up Use synonyms
obtains
the least quota by 29%.Correct subject-verb agreement
obtain
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