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Writing Samples
Band 2.5

the taxi diver gave bad service and you want to complain but respeftfullyy

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment about the experience I had when I used your taxi service
last
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 week. I already sent a
complain
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complaint
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, but no one reply me until now. I am using your company many times before with my friends and family. But
this
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 time, it was very bad. The driver didn’t know the way properly and we
get
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got
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 lost many times. Because of that, we
was
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were
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 late for a meeting that was very important for us.
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, the taxi was not clean. There was dirt on the floor and some food
wrapper
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wrappers
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 on the back seat. The smell inside
car
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the car
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 was not good too, like it
wasn’t
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hadn’t
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 cleaned for
long
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a long
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 time. One more thing, the driver was watching videos on his phone
while
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 driving. That made me and my family feel very unsafe. I told him about it, but he just laughed and ignored what I
say
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said
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. I hope you can do something about
this
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 situation. Please take serious action and make sure your service becomes better. Looking forward
for
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to
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 your answer soon. Yours faithfully, Kevin

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language
Make sure to proofread your essay to correct spelling and grammatical errors, like 'complain' instead of 'complaint', 'was' instead of 'were', and 'like it wasn’t cleaned for long time' to 'like it hadn’t been cleaned for a long time'.
content
Try to provide more specific examples and details to support your points. For example, mention what meeting you were late for or how the driver’s actions made you feel. This strengthens your argument and keeps the reader engaged.
structure
Your introduction could be clearer by stating the purpose of your letter right at the beginning. For instance, instead of saying you are 'expressing disappointment', you could outright mention you are writing to complain about the service.
content
You expressed your feelings clearly and provided specific complaints, which is important for a complaint letter.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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