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Write a letter to your English-speaking friend whom you visited recently. In your letter - Tell him/her how wonderful the experience you had in his country was. - Invite him to visit your country - Tell him what you can do for him during his vi

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Dear Sarah, I hope you are in high spirits and doing well. Thank you for providing me with
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 a wonderful experience in your country. It was one of the best times
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 ever spent in another country. I had an amazing time just because of you. I really appreciate everything. I feel at home in your nation. So now it is my turn to extend an invitation. Why don't you come to my place
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 It would be great fun. I will make sure you have the best time here. We will explore some beautiful and aesthetic places here and will try some delicious cuisines that you may not tried yet. I can't wait to meet you again. See you soon! Yours faithfully, Karan

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Try to be a little more specific about what you enjoyed during your visit to make your experience richer.
coherence and cohesion
Consider adding a closing remark that reinforces your invitation, like mentioning a specific time for her visit.
tone
You have a warm and friendly tone throughout the letter, which is very inviting.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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