In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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the

governments

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tend to believe that the

governments

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face

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financial

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problem

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problems

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or land

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problem

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problems

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caused by

elderly

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the elderly

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problem

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others seem to

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that the elders bring more advantages for communities. To

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large extent, I agree that an ageing population is a negative phenomenon.

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, there are some factors to be taken into

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consideration before making a decision about the population

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on your own. The following paragraphs outline the arguments for

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social issue. One of the main arguments

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against

of

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trend is that it allows

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governments

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shoulder

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various financial

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. Since the elders may not have

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for working

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based on their physical health

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problem

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and

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retired age

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,

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the

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provide different

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for them which

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governments’

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expenses increase.

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, the

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improve and establish more beneficial facilities for older residents, which spend over 10 million annual

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.

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, they launch some projects for ageing citizens. In Hong Kong, the aged over 65

people

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can enjoy the $2 scheme

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that

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the

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any

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fares

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of transportation

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2 dollars. It raises the financial issue if the

governments

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hold many schemes for them. In short, it is generally argued that an ageing

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create

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some

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problem

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for the

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because of money.

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, to a small extent, it may not be the

worse

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situation, depending on the

experience

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in

workplace

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or family. In fact, elders have faced distinct challenges

either

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in either

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working or

life

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in life

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so that they can provide more valuable ideas and comments for

youngers

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younger

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. Before no recommendations from them, a majority of

teenager

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teenagers

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may make an error decision or use a complex path to solve problems.

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the

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advises

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from them, the new generation

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people

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of people

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can accept more effective and

efficiency

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solutions and

experience

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from the traditional

people

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for

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to

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handle

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the handle

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that. After the suggestions, the adolescents can complete the tasks easily and faster than before. In

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case, I appear to believe that the old generation

people

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can contribute their better

experience

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only if

people

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are experienced.

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it seems to be true that

ageing

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problem

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will continue to be a popular issue on the

ground

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that it is not that the financial stress, the seriousness of the elders’

experience

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should not

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. To fully maximize the potential of

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trend, all

governments

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have to do is pay attention to the distribution of the expense in the future.