Write a letter to a taxi company. You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express dissatisfaction with a
trip
I bought from your company, which included a taxi. The tour was excellent Use synonyms
however
the Linking Words
behavior
of the driver was completely terrible. I wrote a letter to the organization a second time Change the spelling
behaviour
due to
the first one was not answered.
First of all I will start with that I brought that Linking Words
trip
to suburban California on 12th May, the ticket was not cheap 200$ Use synonyms
as well as
the travel day was on 15 May by car that Linking Words
your
provided. The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is the driver was late to 30 minutes. Correct pronoun usage
you
As a consequence
, I arrived Linking Words
to
my destination later than I expected. Change preposition
at
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, Linking Words
while
driving the music in Linking Words
car
was Add an article
the car
extremely
loud than it should be and the words in songs the worse. When I asked him pertaining to the problem, he did not pay attention to Rephrase
more
this
and did not Linking Words
made
any reactions. Change the verb form
make
Thus
, I was totally nervous Linking Words
whole
Correct article usage
the whole
trip
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, he smoked quite often Linking Words
while
driving. As we all knowLinking Words
that
, It was unsafe, Correct word choice
apply
Linking Words
due to
there is a rule that says Change preposition
because
us
it is impossible, I have an allergy to Correct pronoun usage
apply
tabac
as well. Change the capitalization
Tabac
Thus
, Linking Words
after
Linking Words
this
situation, I felt myself unhealthy.
I will hope that Linking Words
your
Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
staff will be punished or your Linking Words
governments
will take any suitable solution in Fix the agreement mistake
government
this
case Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
reduce
his salary.
To resolve Wrong verb form
reducing
this
problem, I would appreciate it if you could return Linking Words
my
50% of Correct pronoun usage
apply
payment
or organize a new Correct article usage
the payment
trip
for free.
I look forward to hearing from you. I hope my letter will be answered as soon as possible. If not I will complain to the police Use synonyms
due to
I do not have any Linking Words
choices
.
Fix the agreement mistake
choice
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
SusanaCorrect your spelling
Yours
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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to structure your paragraphs clearly, staying focused on a single idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
Consider using a more formal tone throughout the letter, as it can help convey your seriousness regarding the complaint.
task achievement
Your letter clearly identifies the issues faced during your trip, which is crucial for a complaint letter.
task achievement
You effectively conveyed your emotions and dissatisfaction, making your concerns known.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite