Write a letter to a taxi company. You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express dissatisfaction with a
trip
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I bought from your company, which included a taxi. The tour was excellent
however
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the
behavior
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of the driver was completely terrible. I wrote a letter to the organization a second time
due to
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the first one was not answered. First of all I will start with that I brought that
trip
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to suburban California on 12th May, the ticket was not cheap 200$
as well as
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the travel day was on 15 May by car that
your
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you
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provided. The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is the driver was late to 30 minutes.
As a consequence
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, I arrived
to
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at
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my destination later than I expected.
In addition
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to
this
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,
while
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driving the music in
car
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the car
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was
extremely
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loud than it should be and the words in songs the worse. When I asked him pertaining to the problem, he did not pay attention to
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and did not
made
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any reactions.
Thus
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, I was totally nervous
whole
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the whole
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trip
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.
Furthermore
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, he smoked quite often
while
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driving. As we all know
that
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, It was unsafe,
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due to
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because
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there is a rule that says
us
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apply
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it is impossible, I have an allergy to
tabac
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as well.
Thus
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,
after
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this
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situation, I felt myself unhealthy. I will hope that
your
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apply
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this
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staff will be punished or your
governments
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will take any suitable solution in
this
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case
such
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as
reduce
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reducing
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his salary. To resolve
this
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problem, I would appreciate it if you could return
my
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50% of
payment
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or organize a new
trip
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for free. I look forward to hearing from you. I hope my letter will be answered as soon as possible. If not I will complain to the police
due to
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I do not have any
choices
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choice
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.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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faithfully, Susana

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to structure your paragraphs clearly, staying focused on a single idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
Consider using a more formal tone throughout the letter, as it can help convey your seriousness regarding the complaint.
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Your letter clearly identifies the issues faced during your trip, which is crucial for a complaint letter.
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You effectively conveyed your emotions and dissatisfaction, making your concerns known.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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