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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart
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illustrates
illusrates
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illustrates
 the
amount
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 of
tea
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 and
coffee
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 imported by four different countries in tonnes
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,
it is clear that
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UK
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tea
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in contrast
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Canada
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 the lowest ,
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 the
Coffee
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Canada
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comparison
comparsion
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comparison
UK
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 had the lowest  Looking at the
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 , in more detail
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the
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 highest at 16000
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USA
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 accounting around 9000 , Germany had 6000 fowled
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Canada
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 had 4000 so it
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 of
tea
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coffee
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coffee,
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 the highest
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 was
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Canada
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in Canada
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 at 8000 , after that
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the USA
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accountin
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accounted
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 7000, Germany Approximately at 5000 ,
finally
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loweat
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lowest
amount
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,
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UK
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the UK
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accounting
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 for 4000.  In conclusion , The highest
amount
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in
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the
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tea
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 and lowest in
coffee
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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,
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the USA
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 in the middle,
Germany
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Germany's
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amount
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 of
the
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tea
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 and
coffe
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coffee
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was around of others ,
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Canada
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and Canada
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 the lowest of them in
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tea
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, tea, coffee, uk, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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