Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighbourhood. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific reasons and examples.

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The writer thinks it is a bad idea to let a big company

creates

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a large

factory

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near my place.

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essay will elaborate on the disadvantages of

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circumstance,

such

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air

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pollution

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and waste caused by

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factory's

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factory

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production.

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essay will reveal specific illustrations as well

according to

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the writer's experiences and studies. First and foremost,

air

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pollution

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is the main

drawbacks

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this

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condition

happened

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. Based on my experiences

who was

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working in Jababeka (one of the largest

factories

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area in Indonesia), the

air

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pollutions

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pollution

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from these

factories

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are

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beyond

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apply

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the recommendation from

government

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the government

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This

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conditions happened

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the lack of government evaluation

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the

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apply

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air

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pollution

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. There

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no devices to measure the gas emissions produced by

factories

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. If a big

factory

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is built near my neighbourhood, it will

give

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bad

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a bad

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impact

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the citizen's health,

such

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as cough, breath problems, etc. The bad

air

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pollution

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caused by

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factory

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factories

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is quite hard to reduce since it produces gas emissions. It is better if the

factory

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is built in a specialized area for

factories

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, based on the studies that the writer read, most

factories

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have many wastes that have

impact

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an impact

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as well

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human's

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human

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healths

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health

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For instance

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water

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pollution

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from fabric

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factory

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factories

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. Fabric

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factory

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factories

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usually

use

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chemicals to

colouring

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the garment and it

results

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results in

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waste. The waste has

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implication to the

water

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around that area.

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this

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condition will be harmful to people who live nearby since

water

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is the basic

needs

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for

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human

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humans

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for

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example

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example,

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we need

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to drink, bath, clean, etc

To sum up

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, I think it is not a good idea for the government

let

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an enormous company to make a large

factory

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near citizen's neighbourhood. There are many drawbacks

due to

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this

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decision,

for

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instance

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instance,

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air

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pollution

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and

water

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pollution

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coherence and cohesion

Work on varying your sentence structure and linking ideas more fluidly to improve coherence and cohesion.

positive

The essay clearly outlines the writer's position on the topic, indicating a personal viewpoint.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

302 words

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Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighbourhood. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific reasons and examples.

spending money on the conservation of wildlife animals is a waste of resources. This money would be better spent on other more important things. Do you agree?

More and more people are moving away from agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequence of this? What solutions can you offer?

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some suggest the best way to combat climate change is by having a carbon tax on large corporations’ activities, others think that individuals paying tax on their own carbon footprints will have a greater impact. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.