The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day.

The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day.
The maps below illustrate the changes that have taken place in a specific region, dating back to 1965. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, the area has witnessed significant innovations, including the removal of
nature
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natural
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features, the expansion of the residential area, and the introduction of new public facilities and infrastructure. From 1965 until now, there has been more construction of houses and apartments in the northeastern part of the region, extending the place to live for citizens.
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, several new houses which
is
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are
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close to the river, have been built
in
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on
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the other side of the road bridge throughout the given period. As for the other facilities and infrastructure, the ferry was used to cross the river,
has
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and has
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been replaced by a new road bridge,
provide
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providing
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a better connection between the two sides of the river. In the western part of the region, all the trees have been removed to empty the place for a car park. There is
also
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a small car park
has
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that has
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been added adjacent
the
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to the
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planned
foot bridge
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footbridge
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.
Moreover
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,
ther ewere
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there were
plans to build a yacht marina, and
also
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an additional car park by 2010 to enhance the area’s quality.

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