The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.
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The process by which candy is produced can be outlined in 9 consecutive steps.
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, the
chocolate
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production mechanism involves three main stages.Starting with harvesting and fermenting, followed by processing at the factory (including roasting, crushing, conching, and tempering), and ultimately creating
chocolate
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process
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is a complex one, which requires much time and equipment to complete. The bean separation stage included several steps.
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, ripe red pods are plucked from the cacao tree. After that,Pods are harvested and cacao lettuce
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removed.
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bucks should be fermented for 2-10 days before being dried under the sun. The subsequent stage of the process starts when beans are delivered to the factory and they are
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roasted at a temperature of 120-150C°, followed by crushing in a rolling machine in order to remove the outer shells.Afterwards, the beans can be conched in a candy concher and these beans are
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tempered in a tempering machine.In the final
molding
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moulding
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step,
chocolate
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mass is poured into
molds
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moulds
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to give it the proper shape and resulting in the creation of
chocolate
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chocolate with synonyms.
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