The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart provides information about the salaries of various professions in the UK,

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the table shows the average working hours for each occupation per week. The data was described by a lecturer at the university.

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, there are improvements in salary when started compared to after three years. The highest income is an underground driver,

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, the lowest is a nurse. Looking first at the police job, there is a little increase between starting and 3 years later, but still in the same range, over 20.000.

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, the nurse has a similar trend,

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the number started and increased from around 32.000 to 35.000.

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, the beginning count of firefighters is 40.000, and after 3 years, the revenue developed to around 43.000.

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, the underground driver has the biggest number, it started from about 50.000

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and improved to over 50.000 in the three next periods.

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, the average working time weekly is 36 to 55 hours. The smallest time is underground driver,

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the highest is teacher and firefighter.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

average salary
working hours
profession
comparison
remuneration
discrepancy
work-life balance
high-paying
low-paying
notable differences
average working hours
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summary of data
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