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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides a comparison of the proportions of
electricity
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 generated from four
energy
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 sources in five Asian countries in 2005. The figures are given in percentages.
Overall
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, coal and lignite were the primary sources of
electricity
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 generation in Malaysia and Singapore,
whereas
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 nuclear power was the most significant in
Japan
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. Meanwhile, South Korea relied heavily on hydro and wind
energy
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, and
Thailand
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 generated the highest proportion of its
electricity
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 from other fuels. In terms of coal and lignite, Malaysia and Singapore produced 61% and 42% of their
electricity
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 from
this
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 source respectively, making it the dominant fuel type in both countries.
By contrast
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, the figures for
Thailand
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, South Korea, and
Japan
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 were considerably lower, at just 3%, 5%, and 6% respectively. With regard to nuclear
energy
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,
Japan
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 was the largest consumer, generating 49% of its
electricity
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 from nuclear power,
while
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Thailand
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 did not use
this
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 source at all. In terms of hydro and wind
energy
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, South Korea led with 48%, far higher than Malaysia (5%),
Thailand
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 (19%), and both Singapore and
Japan
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 (3% each). Notably,
Thailand
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 generated the largest share of its
electricity
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 from other fuels, at 42%.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, energy, japan, thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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