The maps illustrtae the changes in the layout of Panch village between 2005 to 2015.

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The maps

illustrtae

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illustrate

the changes in the layout of Panch

village

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Village

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between 2005 to 2015.

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, since

electrcity

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electricity

towers have been added along the main

road

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, the

houses

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now are provided with power and

satelite

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satellite

. Notably, several additional

houses

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have been added, and the supermarket

became

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bigger. In the middle of the village, there is a wide main

road

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, which has been constructed,once was a narrow

road

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with holes in the ground.

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its

right

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there are several street signs,

while

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its left there are power towers

hav

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have

been placed. By the end of the

road

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next to the speed sign, there is a small

enterance

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entrance

from the

road

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, which in the past

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only

two

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accomidations

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accommodations

, now features three

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accommodations

. South of these

houses

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, once housed three

houses

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in a

rwo

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row

, in 2015, the first

two

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houses

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has been

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removed,

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the one

at the end

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remained the same, and now it

have

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its own

satelite

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satellite

. Beside the house, there is a

school

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with

two

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buildings, which in the past taught only primary

school

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, but now the

school

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containes

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building.

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, now the

school

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teaches secondary

school

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so, students can continue their education. Across the main

road

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, in front of the

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school

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school,

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there are many

houses

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, which have not changed over the

ten year

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period,

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nevertheless

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they are provided with

satelite

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satellite

. Just beside

these

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this

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accommodations

accomidations

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there is a supermarket, as the map shows the supermarket witnessed an expansion. Near to

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there are

two

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signal towers have been constructed to provide electricity to the villagers.

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Ensure that your ideas flow logically from one to another. Using cohesive devices (such as linking words) can help improve the connection between sentences and paragraphs.

Coherence and Cohesion

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Task Achievement

You successfully described the changes in the village layout over the given time period, which is a key requirement of the task.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

260 words

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The maps illustrtae the changes in the layout of Panch village between 2005 to 2015.

Fully explain your ideas

childhood obesity has become more and more popular.

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled, while at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?