The table below shows the number of people working different jobs in one country in 2015 and 2025, and its projected changes. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of people working different jobs in one country in 2015 and 2025, and its projected changes. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the number of people working different jobs in one country in 2015 and 2025, and its projected changes. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows the proportion of people working in seven types of jobs in a particular country over a decade in 2015 and 2025,
as well as
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its projected changes.
Overall
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it is clear that
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while
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the number of individuals increased in six occupations, the proportion of people who worked as a cleaner decreased. Looking at the table, the greatest increase was in hospitality from 1,235,000 to 1,333,800 (+8%).
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, a small increase was for the number of workers employed as professors increased to three per cent, rising from 2,785,000 to 2,868,550.
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, employers in retail trade showed a slight growth of 3,5% from 1,785,000 to 1,847,475.In terms of education, employees showed a rise of four per cent, from 1,475,000 to 1,534,000.
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, the proportion of office managers experienced a significant increase from 1,115,000 to 1,170,750 (+5%)
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, the figure for cleaners experienced a small drop to one per cent, decreasing from 1,321,000 to 1,221,000

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