Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays different types of
transportation
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available
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bicycles
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as
away
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for
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tranporting
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transporting
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transport in the city ,
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because
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bicycles
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bicycle
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users we need
health
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awarness
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awareness
campighns
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campaigns
and specialized parking areas. Fewer
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using
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use
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bicycles
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to go to their
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, schools and other places
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the new technology in
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which is metroes that have a lot of advantages.
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, it is the least expensive method
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all the other
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methods ,
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well
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no
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to spend time looking for a parking area .
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, it is the fastest way for
transportation
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, especially on traffic days as it has its own way
for
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movments
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movement
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, Riyadh is the most overcrowded and congested city in Saudi Arabia
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and has
a
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hot weather which
isa
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very difficult to ride a
bicycle
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on
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this
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city , for
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this metros
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are
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established in 2024 with two riyals ticket
price
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prices
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,
lead
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to easy life
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. Multiple ways to support and motivate people to ride
bicycles
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for daily life
transportation
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, establishing
health
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awarness
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awareness
campighns
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campaigns
about
wight
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weight
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loss
technique
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techniques
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by using
bicycles
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daily and
build
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building
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more parking areas for
it
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them
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.
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, doctors and
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care practitioners visit schools , different
work places
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workplaces
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and malls to talk about the advantages of at least one hour on a
bicycle
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daily and how it
effects
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affects
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the cardiovascular system and
the
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general
health
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.
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,
policy makers
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policymakers
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and
goverments
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governments
government
needs
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to work on the parking problems and make sure that
variety
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a variety
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of options
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is avaliable
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avaliable
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available
all over the
places
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place
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, so no time will be wasted
for
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looking for empty space to park your
bicycle
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. In conclusion,
new
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a new
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inexpensive type of
transportation
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develps
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develops
which is the metro , which
make
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less
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fewer
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indivisuals
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individuals
individual
use
bicycles
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. To solve
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problem,
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health care
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healthcare
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practitioner
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practitioners
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and leaders need to start educating people about the importance of riding a
bicycle
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,
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and provide spaces for parking .

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable transport
  • cycling infrastructure
  • bike lanes
  • bike-sharing programs
  • traffic calming measures
  • commute
  • subsidies
  • physical exertion
  • environmental benefits
  • safety regulations
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