The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the frequency with which individuals in the USA dined at fast
food
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spots from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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people prefer to eat in fast
food
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restaurants once a week or a month.
However
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, the extent of individuals who went to eat unhealthy
food
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every day or never was very little. A significant 31% to 33% of people in the USA ate in fast
food
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restaurants once a week in both 2003 and 2006,
respectevely
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respectively
,
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however
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however,
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this
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proportion
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showed a moderate decline to around 27% in 2013. Those eating there once or twice a month
also
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presented a significant
proportion
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of
US
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the US
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population in these three years.
This
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proportion
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first dropped from 2003’s 30% to 2006’s 25%
,
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and
then
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jumped to around 33% in 2013. The
proportion
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of those eating in fast-
food
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restaurants several times a week varied between 15% and 20%,
while
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the
proportion
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eating there a few times a year showed an increase from approximately 13% to 15% over the period.
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, in none of the three years were more than 5% of people in either the
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everyday
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or the never

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequency
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • stabilize
  • decline
  • highlight
  • reduction
  • reliance
  • eating habits
  • population segment
  • weekly basis
  • rarely
  • initial decrease
  • dine
  • establishments
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