You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

Dear Juhi, Hello. I hope

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letter finds you well.

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is to actually apologize as by mistake I carried your

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with me. Thank you so much for a wonderful weekend. I really enjoyed those two days I spent in your house spending quality time with you. As you know, I live in a large city where I

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have many close friends like you

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, I really needed a short break like

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and needless to say you are an amazing host. The reason I mistook your

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is mine is the same as yours so

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packing in a hurry I accidently put your device in my bag. I realized my mistake only when I switched on the device after reaching home. But

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worry. I am sending it back to you

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afternoon by a postal service which delivers

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objects and you will be receiving it by tomorrow noon. The receipt number that you will need to provide is A888. Once again, I am really sorry for the inconvenience. Hope to see you soon. Best regards, Veni.

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coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking down long sentences for clarity and to enhance readability.

task achievement

Make sure to proofread for minor errors like 'accidently' which should be 'accidentally'.

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The letter has a warm and friendly tone, perfect for the context.

coherence and cohesion

Your thoughts are clearly organized and logically structured, making it easy to follow your narrative.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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