You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

Dear Gurpreet, I hope you are doing great in your life and enjoying the summer with your family, I enjoyed a lot on a long weekend with you in the cottage. The best time was boating and meal prep with you. I want
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to inform you that, by mistake, your Beats headphones came in my bag because we both have the same brand and the same colour, but
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headset model is bigger than mine and more valuable price-wise. When I was packing my stuff, by mistake your headset went into my bag, I thought it was mine. I will send your earphones by mail on coming Saturday, maybe you will get them in 3-4 days. Hoping you will be happy. Yours faithfully, Manpreet Singh

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Make sure to use correct punctuation and grammar throughout your letter. For example, use proper apostrophes and punctuation with your possessive forms, like 'yours'.
coherence and cohesion
Try to connect your ideas more clearly by using linking words or phrases. This will help your letter flow better and make your message clearer.
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You included personal experiences that made the stay enjoyable, which adds a nice touch to the letter.
coherence and cohesion
You explained how the mistake happened clearly, making it easy for the reader to understand.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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