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The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below
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show
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shows
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 the percentages of different types of household
waste
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 that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.
overall
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, we see there is 4
diffreant
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different
type
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types
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 of
waste
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 that the household
recycled
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recycle
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, plastic
also
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 cans,
paper
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 and
glass
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. we see from what is shown in the chart
the
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that
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 plastic in 1992 was nearly 10 , cans were
nearly
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to
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apply
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20
paper
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 almost
near
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nearly
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 25,
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glass
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and glass
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above
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was above
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 15
in
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at
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 that time of the year. in 1997 and 2002 we see plastic kept the same percentage as
pervuios
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previous
 years,
cans
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can
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show
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showed
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little
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a little
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 bit high in 2002 ,and
paper
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show
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showed
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little
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a little
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 bit higher nearly 15
percent
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per cent
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 in recycled
waste
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 . in the
last
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colounm
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column
that is
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glass
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the glass
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show
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 that kept the
domaince
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domain
domains
dominance
 of recycled
waste
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,by nearly hitting 50
percentage
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per cent
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from
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of
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 all of the
waste
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, in 1997 the
domince
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dominance
 was for
the
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apply
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paper
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 recycled
wast
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waste
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 in
final
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the final
a final
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 report the
glass
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 was the top of
wast
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waste
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 recycled.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words show, waste, paper, glass with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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