The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrates 4 countries that allocated money to books over a decade from 1995 to 2005. The vertical axis shows the amount of money,

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the horizontal one represents the time period.

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, Germany was in a leading position in the whole

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Austria at the beginning of time was in a losing position, but from 2001 its

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increased significantly and in 2003 year Austria was in third place. France and Italy graphs fluctuated approximately between 50 and 70 million dollars. Germany

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fluctuated marginally,

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was between 80 and 95 million dollars. There was the sharpest soar in 2001 in Austria, and Germany had a peak in 2005.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words graph with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

115 words

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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. Others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

City living in the 21st century is stressful and offers no advantage. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement.