Write an apology letter to a friend from overseas that it will be impossible for him or her to stay with you. In the letter, you should: • Tell why it is not possible • Give him alternative choice to live • Invite him or her to come in the future You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Nick, I hope you are well, I am happy to hear that you are going to travel and stay

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hometown. First of all, I want to apologise

from

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you that I can not host you

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my house. As you know,I live with my family,

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they are happy too you are

coming

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my hometown

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we are a crowded family.

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is because

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There are

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enough rooms to host you. Actually, I do not

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want you to cancel your holiday, I would like to find an

accommadation

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for you. you can trust me to find a perfect place and you will feel

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at home. I will be close to me as well, in

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way, we will see each other more often. Another alternative is to postpone your visit to next year because I will buy my own house and I have some

plan

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for it. it is like

to build

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gamming

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and cinema room. In

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way, we will

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enjoyable time. I apologise again, speak to you soon Best regards, Deniz Y.

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure proper spacing after commas and periods to improve readability.

task achievement

Clarify your sentences to avoid confusion, for example, instead of 'I do not to want you' use 'I do not want you'.

task achievement

In your alternative suggestions, elaborate more on how they would benefit your friend for better task achievement.

task achievement

You expressed genuine concern for your friend's visit and suggested alternatives, showing good task achievement.

coherence and cohesion

The idea of suggesting a future visit is positive and friendly, which adds warmth to your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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