The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year.
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The graph demonstrates how teenagers travel to school depending on
distance
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in the UK during one year. The four travel modes are shown, namely: walking, cycling, car, and bus. 
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, it is seen that walking and cycling are most common for short distances, in terms of long distances bus and car are more preferable. walking is the most used one in 0-1
miles
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by 90%.
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,
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percentage decreases significantly as the
distance
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increases, dropping to 60% in 1-2
miles
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and falling sharply to 25% in 2-5
miles
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. regarding cycling, half of the students use the bicycle for the shortest
distance
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but the
distance
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goes up to 1-2
miles
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proportion of cycling
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rises over 75% and in 2-5
miles
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it goes down to below 50%. Regarding to use of cars increases with
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so in close
distance
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children driven by car is less than 10% but
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figure continuously climbs to 20% as the
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range grows and arrives at its highest point over 30% in 2-5
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.
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go down to about 20% over 5
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. as for the ratio of using
bus
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buses
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is getting bigger number as
distance
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go far. in short
distance
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buses used by a few
percent
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per cent
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of students, in 1-2
miles
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proportion goes to 10% and
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soars sharply to 50% in 2-5
miles
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. in over than 5
miles
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buses are the most chosen journey tool by over 65% percent of 11-16 aged children.

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