The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.

The diagram shows the

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of

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delivered by Federal Express and

TNT

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Mail Services between 1920 and 2000.

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,

although

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FedEx

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was the most popular mail service at

first,

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it was replaced by

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towards the

end

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of the

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.

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,

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remain

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fluctuated in every decade,

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,

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shows

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significant

growth

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towards

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. Both

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and

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,

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got almost

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number

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of

parcels

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delivered in 1990.

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,

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reach

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its

peak

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in 1940,

while

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reach

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its

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in 2000. In the first decade (1920-1930) the

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delieverd

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delivered

by

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slightly

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, from 15.000

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to about 18.000

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.

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trend steadily

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growth

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until it reached the

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in 1940 for about 24.000

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delivered by

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.

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, in 1950, the

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delivered by

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plummeted dramatically and reached the lowest

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in 1960 for about 11.000

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.

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this

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, the

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delivered by

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did not much change in several decades until

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1970, the

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of packages delivered by

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started to

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again and slightly rose until 1980 and plateaued until the

end

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of the

survey

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for about 16.000 packages delivered.

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the other hand,

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started the

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with lower numbers of

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delivered than

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in the first decades for about 5000, but

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consistent

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for

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the next

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decades. From 1920 until 1960 the

number

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of

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delivered by

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shows significant

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for about 10.000

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. After, 1960 the numbers of

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delivered by

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remain

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stable until its shows dramatically

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and

reach

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its

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peak

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and

outsripped

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outstripped

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in

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the

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of

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survey

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the survey

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with 25.000

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delivered.

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,

at the

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end

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of

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survey

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, the

number

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of

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of

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delivered by

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is higher than the

number

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of

parcels

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delivered by

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.

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got

for

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about 15.000

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at the

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end

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of

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survey

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and

TNT

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got 25.000

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at the

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end

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of

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.

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,

while

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the former got the highest delivered

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parcel

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in 1940, the latter

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considerable

growth

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and got the highest delivered

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parcel

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at the

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end

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of

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survey

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.